Chapter 4
When they got to the street it was really long. The rain was turning into a storm. “Now. I told you it was an adventure.” Trevor said. “You were right, Let’s keep going¨, Josh said. When they got half way through the trail they saw this tree with grapefruits. “Well it looks pretty tasty maybe we should go pick it”. “Well it does look pretty tasty right” “Yeah I guess so”, “C’mon” Said Josh Ok let’s go.”
Chapter 5
Trevor and Josh sprinted across the drenched grass. As they sprinted they realized that they were in a huge storm. When they got to the bush they pulled the grapefruit as hard as they could. After they got it. KA BAM! The grapefruit ripped right off of the tree. ”Come on!” they both screamed, “We need to get home before the storm gets worse.” Then they got back to their bikes. Trevor took off. Then Josh yelled, “Wait up!”and Josh sprinted up to Trevor. Trevor stopped instantly. “What is it”? asked Trevor. “The bike broke!!!!” said Josh. WHAT!!!” “REALLY!?!’ Trevor asked. “That’s my brothers bike.’ “He’s gonna be so mad.” “Oh no this is bad.” said Trevor. “I’m going to try to fix it.” said Josh. “UHHH!” “The chain got locked out of place so the wheel won’t move me forward.” “What do we do now?!” said Trevor. “I guess we’ll just have to run.” Trevor and Josh were soaked. The rain was getting worse and worse by every second. “Come on!!!”
“We have to go!!!“ Ok let’s go. Said Trevor. “Wait there’s a tall gate over there do you want to climb over!?” Trevor said. “Uhhhh.” “Take the risk or take longer?” Let’s risk it. Said Josh. “Ok how do we get over this?” Said Trevor. “I have no idea.” “What!?” “I thought you did!” “Wait wait wait I have an idea.”
Chapter 6
“We can just do it the regular way.” Said Josh.
“Ok but I don’t know how so you will have to do it.” Said Trevor. “I can try.” Said Josh. “Ok.” “UHH!” “It’s too slippery!” “Wait I got a good idea.”, said Josh, “I can try to get up by you keeping the bike stabilized and I will get up using the bike’s support.” Said Josh Ok. “I’m getting there!” Said Josh. “Now just jump.” Said Trevor. Ok. Then Josh jumped and opened the door from the other end and let Trevor in. Ok we have to run! Then we heard another voice, “Hey Trevor! Josh! Run to the house!” “Who was that?” Josh asked. “My mom, she’s in the car.” “Oh ok.”, said Josh, “I didn’t see her. Let’s go to the movies.!”
That was the story of Trevors and Josh’s crazy adventure.
THE END
Dear Josh,
ReplyDeleteI like your blog.
It is really long but it is really good.
I like to race bikes with my dad.
Love,
Sophia
Josh,
ReplyDeleteThat adventure we had was so awesome! That was at the right time at the right place That adventure was so fun and extreme.
Your friend trevor
Dear Josh,
ReplyDeleteYour story is amazing and long!
Did you and Trevor have a great time?
Hope you had a good trip.
love,
Claire
Dear Josh,
ReplyDeleteI love your story. Why did you make it so long? Why did you make a story for your blog?
From,
Jershon
Dear Josh,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your story. Was that a real story? I wish I was in the story.
from: Eric
To Josh
Dear Josh,
ReplyDeleteIs that really true?What was your favorite part of it?
,Mariah
Josh ( and maybe trevor),
ReplyDeleteThat story was so cool! I wish I did that for my blog. Is that a true story?
Dear Josh,
ReplyDeleteYour blog is so cool.I liked the part where you said Ka Bam! How did you come up with the idea of a race? Hope you respond.
- Kadyn
Dear josh
ReplyDeletewow that must have took a long time.what is your favorite part about the story?I liked chapter 2.
your friend
emily
Dear Josh,
ReplyDeleteI like the story it was so cool.I like the trip with trevor.I wish i could go on the trip it sounds so fun.
Love,
Kobe
josh that is so cool did you really go to the movies? who who the race? once me and my friend did a race and i won
ReplyDeleteElliott
Dear Josh,
ReplyDeletehi good job! Did you want to climb the gate. Your adventure seem fun.
Your Frend Haleigh
Dear Josh,
ReplyDeleteI like how your story has chapters and that you have Trevor in your story. Is your story a true story or is it just called true story? I like how your story has a storm and that your bike broke.
Your classmate,
Kyler
Hi Josh
ReplyDeleteThat sounded like quite an adventure. Did you have fun? hope you did!
Love Olivia
That story was so awesome, sorry that it rained on you.
ReplyDeleteBY: Lela
dear Josh ,
ReplyDeleteThat is one crazy story I bet it was a lot of fun! my dad and i always go on crazy adventures but yours was a lot crazier
than ours .were you nervous or scared?
from,
The Happy Girl :)
p.s.Maya.O
Dear Josh,
ReplyDeleteThat is a really cool story! Is it true ? how long did it take you and trevor to go on that journey? what movie did you watch?
Your friend,
Mariana S.
Dear Josh,
ReplyDeleteVery cool story
Very intesting story
Very cool
Love,
Dzoveeg
Hi Josh,
ReplyDeleteI pretty sure half of that story was not real. Also was there really a huge storm? Or were you exaggerating. Yeah, I think you were exaggerating. Also where were you where were you when this incident happened? I really liked your story.
From,
Kennedy
Dear josh,
ReplyDeleteYour story is so cool and half fake:).
Hi Josh,
ReplyDeleteThat was a CRAZY story. I think i would want to do that .Did you git in LOTS of trouble when you did that?
Your friend keyion
p.s. That sounds AWSOME!!!!!!!!!
Dear trevor and josh
ReplyDeletethat sounds very fun i have never had a race on bikes it sound SO fun!!!
from Irie
Dear Josh,
ReplyDeleteThat was a crazy advanture! I would want to do that. Did you get in a lot of trouble?
Your friend,
Ashlyn
Dear Josh,
ReplyDeleteThat adventure was AWESOME!!! You make great blogs especaliy when its like than! Did you make that story up? Great blog thumbs up! :)