The Little Candy: Narrative Writing

The Little Candy

By: Britney B. 

Once upon a time, there was a little candy named Ponelipe. She was a cute, small, and sweet. Her friends, Candelo and Cotteny, loved her. Most candies in the land don’t like them, but they don’t get upset. They have sleepovers, playdates, and dinner together. 

In one month, a new candy friend came to town. Her name was Nola Rancher. She is the sister of Joly Rancher. Nola was a nice friend to everyone.The first day of her arrival, she made friends with everyone in Candyland. One day, Ponelipe saw Nola hanging out with her friends. Ponelipe was shocked. She couldn’t try to steal them back. She tried thinking and thinking and thinking of a way to impress them, then boom, she thought of the most amazing idea. She would make the most greatest dinner. A surprise dinner for them. First, she made Chicken Cranberry Pie. You got to have some sweetness in these pies. Then, she made Sweet Double Cheese Cake. Next, Ponelipe made for dinner Holly Jolly Cupcakes. Last, she made their favorite dessert, Sweet Candy Corn Ice Cream.”They would be so grateful when they saw I made that for desert.”

When she brought all of the food for dinner, she saw Nola making Sweet Candy Corn Ice Cream. When her friends asked if she could join, they the desert too. She burst into tears and dashed out of the house to her candy house. Her pet, Gingy, saw her crying in the living room. Gingy is a pet gingerbread dog. Ponelipe looked at her picture and thought of their best times together.

Now she was sobbing. They asked Nola if they could bring some of the desert with them togo. They dashed out of the house without saying goodbye to Nola. They ran as fast as they could to Ponelipe’s house and opened the door. Candelo and Cotteny saw her sobbing and both said, “Sorry for going and hanging out with Nola. Forgive us?” Ponelipe said,”Yes, but you guys have to tell Nola she can’t hang out or do anything with you anymore but you guys could still be friends. They said, "ok.” Candelo and Cotteny told Nola they can’t hang out with her but they could still be friends and say hi sometimes.She was sad. Soon, Nola hung out with other friends. We were all happy in the end of troublesome. They wound up to be good friends altogether!